a poem i wrote when i was 6

this is a poem i wrote when i was six please write your comments and rate below

‘if i was a spider no doubt of it at all,
mum would scream the place down, and cuddle at the wall.
she’s calll the bug patrol, who’d come round right away,
and scare, ME! the pesky spider, far far away’

Wow… That’s pretty good for a poem written by a 6 year old… I like it… It sounds kinda like a nursery rhyme… Good job… I like the last line though… You repeat words but it acutally sounds good though…

Why thank you. iwas bored so i think my mum said i started reading then writing poems and stories. i have done all my life. i’m writing a story and hoping to get it published