Poem....

ok let me get something straight before i tell you my poem… Before you go and think i need help. This is a poem me and some of my friends put together for school… so here goes. We do not feel this way…
It’s called Rage Unleashed
My soul screams with rage…
It feels as if there is a war being fought inside…
And everytime the enemies sword’s clash it feels as if 1,000 hot steak knives
are being driven into my skull…
I scream out in agony…
Only to be laughed at by my friends, who turned out to be nothing but phonies…
I ask why me??
Only to be answered by the cold laughter of the devil himself…
I wake up in the middle of the night…
Dripping in cold sweat…
I ask myself doesn’t anyone love me??
Doen’t anyone like me??
They all tell me yes of course…
Only to go and talk behind my back…
I feel as if i shall explode…
I keep myself sane by my firm faith in the Lord Jesus Christ…
And my un-questioning faith in the Holy Bible…
Something that angers me is the dispute that shouldn’t be a dispute…
I will not go into anymore detail…
For the fear of adding to the list of people who torment my soul…
If that should happen, I fear I shall die…
As we all must die Someday…
The true question is When…

Dude thats some material for song. Beautiful i must say, good work